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A Train of Thought

Microfiction

By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Photo by Nathan Powers on Unsplash

Rob’s phone started ringing relentlessly. Dismayed, didn’t deduce it. He left the house with a bottle of vodka in his jeans pocket, heading for the train station. Regina seemed to leave a hole in his ears and heart like a mad meteorite.

He had no intention of picking up, but the sound bore pretentious bits in the passengers' ears like a precocious Christmas song.

He dropped the bottle on the floor several times, staggering to pick it up. Luckily, it didn't break, but it caught the attention of a few punters.

Ruby was one of them.

Short Story

About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

Where wild roses grow full of words...

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  • Bandzile Hlopheabout 3 hours ago

    This would actually be a great story if it weren't so rushed and a bit longer. Regardless it's good as it is.

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