Poets logo

🇹​​🇷​​🇦​​🇮​​🇳​​🇸​

~~~~

By Rowan Finley Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Pramod Tiwari: https://www.pexels.com/photo/train-carriage-on-foggy-night-with-full-moon-13970797/

In the swing of night,

train sounds horn several times, thoroughly.

Playground remaining parts and swings rest,

desiring to be finished and ready.

A car spins its wheels at the dead-ended-road, as an escape route must be made.

A bold cricket harps his steady pitch.

Literature lingers, as stacks of dusty papers in mind’s grazing munch.

There must be order in the court of unstoppable inspiration, surely?

Or, does it stay awake to all hours of the sounding night and past-seen-imagery of the day lived?

surreal poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (4)

Sign in to comment
  • Maya Or Tzur2 months ago

    Very atmospheric and philosophical. "A bold cricket harps his steady pitch." - lyrical and beautiful, loved that line especially. Reminds me of Pinnochio 😅 Way to go 🙂🪷

  • Komal2 months ago

    Ooo, this is quietly powerful! Makes me feel like this was written in that exact moment when the world is asleep but your mind is throwing a creative house party. And you just… opened the door and let it happen.

  • Archery Owl2 months ago

    I like the phrase “in the swing of night” it suggest a shift in atmosphere, which is nicely juxtaposed with the mind that continues to graze 🐄 🛤️ 📃

  • Colleen Walters2 months ago

    It's amazing how air moisture magnifies sounds exponentially... and some of those trains have such shrill horns- " train sounds horn several times, thoroughly" I can hear it from here lol 😬👀

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.