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A haiku

By Cristal S.Published 3 days ago 1 min read
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Heart thumps, bladder shrinks.

Three long minutes—thump-thump-thump.

Two stripes. Thump. Thump. Thump.

Haiku

About the Creator

Cristal S.

I've noticed that when I follow the path I enjoy most, I often end up swimming upstream. So here I am, right in the middle of it – writing about it all and more. ♡

@cristals.word.drawer

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  • Sandy Gillmanabout 17 hours ago

    Haha! Yes those three minutes can be very long! Great haiku!

  • I saw your reply to Paul so I think it's safe for me to say that this should be a nightmare for everyone. I mean, a child, in this economy? Lol. Loved your Haiku!

  • L.C. Schäfer3 days ago

    This teetering moment, with such a lot of emotion behind it, perfectly described 😁

  • Kendall Defoe 3 days ago

    Clever...and revealing?

  • Very deep. In this day and age of fascism the personal becomes political. Well written Cristal.

  • Paul Stewart3 days ago

    Ouch. All the feels. You've captured that.momebr perfectly, Cristal.

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