โLet's get cereal
I'll Grab a Big Bowl, oh noโฆ
Damn, The milk is oldโฆโ ๐ฅ
Authors Note: I always purchase milk from the grocery store and Declare that I will drink more milk ๐ฎ but when I get ready for a nice cold Splash, I find out it doesn't endure for too longโฆ
I pondered about how long it lasts vs Me not really having a desire in milkโฆ hhhmm Maybe it's me๐ค๐ญ
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (12)
I wish milk lasted longer! Great work!
Use a little every day to prevent it from going sour.
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Well done!
Lol, I think it's you! ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ Loved your Senryu!
Super humorous!!! Loved it!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Yeah, maybe it's you. Lol
story of my life...lol in more ways than one
Ew, yuck, spoiled milk. Great senryu, Handsome
haha! Expired milk is the worst, especially when you've already poured the cereal. Dry cereal just doesn't hit the same. Great piece, Lonzo!
Mmm...Cinnamon toast Crunch!!! I would have probably used the next best thing, coffee creamer๐ ๐คข, lol. Nice entry, Lonzo!