Anticipation
Results inevitable.
By Lamar WigginsPublished 8 days ago • Updated 8 days ago • 1 min read
Photo by Shot By Ireland on Unsplash
a single flash lights
the night—restless seconds tick
awaiting sky’s boom
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
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Comments (24)
A wonderful haiku… I love thunderstorms, as long as I’m safely tucked away inside.
包公❤️❤️ 包公❤️❤️ 包公❤️❤️ WOW 包公❤️❤️ 包公❤️❤️ 包公❤️❤️
Gotta love the flash and boom. You really created the feeling and anticipation Lamar.
It is that same feeling when you see someone swing a baseball bat and hear it connect a second or two later.
You really brought out the energy of a thunderstorm quite well in this poem! Enjoyed!
Returning, Lamar, to congratulate you on this week's leaderboard placement❣
Congrats on your placement, Lamar!
ooh, this is like a snapshot of electricity
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I love this haiku. Nature is always such a great inspiration.
Congrats on leaderboard! Don’t spend it all in one place!💖
Oh, love this haiku, Lamar
Fantastic! This made me miss spring thunderstorms, it's so vivid!
I get startled very easily so I'm always grateful that lightening arrives before the thunder. It's like nature gives me a heads up, lol. Loved your poem!
I was anticipating a start of "It was a dark and stormy night." So glad you surprised me after the title and cover image.
Great
Today is Chinese New Years. Happy New Years!
I've spent many anticipatory moments like this. Nice work, Lamar! 😉
great sequencing of light and sound.. as always a treat to read your work!
I can almost smell the rain
That is anticipated moment !
I love lightening and adored the haiku!
Great image and haiku, Lamar!
Thunderstorms are something aren't they. Good job.