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As I See Premature Deaths

Chemicals are other name of carcinogens

By Seema PatelPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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A neighbor woman I knew —

who was younger than me

died of aggressive cancer

a few months ago.

She left behind

two small kids,

the age of my children.

I see her widower

lost and struggling.

Her grieving mother —

swallowing her own pain

is helping raise the children.

I visited their house

soon after the death.

They are coping, trying to be brave,

because we helpless humans

have no other choice —

no matter how monstrous the tragedy!

While cancer can happen

even if we’re vigilant,

I must say: a lot of cases

are tied to lifestyle issues.

We are not paying attention

to the body’s signals,

and we’re exposing it

to endless chemicals —

day and night,

crossing the tipping point.

I keep raising awareness,

but I get lukewarm responses.

Temptation and ignorance wins,

premature death destroys families,

cherubs become orphans.

Note: Will we take health information seriously?

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About the Creator

Seema Patel

I am Seema. I contribute to PubMed, Blogger, Medium, LinkedIn, Substack, Amazon KDP, Vocal Media.

I write on nature, health, parenting, creativity, gardening, social issues.

My art shop: https://artsforhealinggifts.etsy.com

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  • Komal11 months ago

    This hits hard—that line “cherubs become orphans” just aches. Keep sounding the call—it is reaching people, even if they don’t show it right away.✨

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