Betrayal of Palms
The small heat grows inconvenient and unromantic
Photo by Priscilla Du Preez 🇨🇦 on Unsplash
We lace our cold hands
palms grow sweaty, we release
Now moist, cold, apart.
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John R. Godwin
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Comments (8)
Congratulations! Love the phrase 'palms grow sweaty'.
I love your take on the haiku challenge, John, and I can feel the sensation in my palms. Congratulations on your win!💙👏
Congratulations on placing in the challenge!🎉It's one of my favorite entries, so emotional.
Congratulations!💖
Congrats John!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
All too realistic, this haiku describes the moment of sweating palms to a tee.....I nearly felt the cold and clammy perspiration myself.
Great haiku! That release feels more emotional than physical.