Bus Stop
A Haiku
Photo by Ian Battaglia on Unsplash
Shared breath between coats
The bus stop light flickers once
Enough to thaw time
About the Creator
SUEDE the poet
English Teacher by Day. Poet by Scarlight. Tattooed Storyteller. Trying to make beauty out of bruises and meaning out of madness. I write at the intersection of faith, psychology, philosophy, and the human condition.
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Comments (9)
Congratulations! Love the last line.
Such a cool haiku. I'm always impressed by good ones. It's easy to write a haiku, but difficult to write a good one. You certainly did that here. Great imagery and feeling. Congratulations on your win.
This feels dreamy, like magick, Suede. One of my favorite entries, for sure. Congratulations on your win!💙👏😊
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
"enough to thaw time" is just absolutely magical. Congratulations on placing, so well-deserved!
congrats Suede - this one sounds deep!
Love this! Congrats!
Congratulations!
Lovely haiku. I hope you get some recognition in this round of challenges, looking forward to reading your other pieces.