Knowing the ending
we rewind the cassette to
our sweet beginning
Poetry and little thoughts
Boston, MA
www.avamariemack.com
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Mmmm yes this was SO well done. I love great haikus ❤️
Interesting theory. Well written.
This is a truly beautiful haiku. A simply stated definition of time and it’s meaning for us.
Many of my Walkman memories are in this haiku... 🙂
My favourite of the time haiku's I've read <3 Very lovely
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Mmmm yes this was SO well done. I love great haikus ❤️
Interesting theory. Well written.
This is a truly beautiful haiku. A simply stated definition of time and it’s meaning for us.
Many of my Walkman memories are in this haiku... 🙂
My favourite of the time haiku's I've read <3 Very lovely