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Fawning π« π·
Delulu π€ͺπ
Wavering πβοΈ
Jaded ππͺ«
Disenchanted ππ₯
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When Iβm not lost in my own plots, Iβm either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging lifeΒ withΒ aΒ grin.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Comments (11)
Komal, I love how concise this poem is; Extremely effective. Congratulations on your leaderboard placementβ£
Congrats on your LB placement!
I love how each word carries its own atmosphere :-)
I agree with Sam! Love this!
Accurate
Loved it despite the sad undertone. π
This captures that 'delulu' to 'disenchanted' arc perfectly. There's something so lonely but beautiful about the visual of sitting on that curved road while processing all these stage
man the stages of light leaving eyes-thought provoking and I feel we have all been there
Familiar words π
Wow, I don't know whether to laugh or cry- it's funny and sad at the same time.π I'm pretty sure I'm Delulu ππ€ͺπ
Wow what a poignant progression of human nature.