Fireplace murmurs low,
embers whisper old stories
Envious...moon sighs!
About the Creator
Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.
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This is so beautiful and vivid.
I loved it. There is peace is watching glowing embers and listening to crackling logs.
What a quaint fireplace this is, so different, small heat indeed, great haiku.
This entire haiku has the feeling of familiarity and comfort. Especially the line: “embers whisper old stories.” Beautifully written, Antoni!
Perfect and comforting.
Love this. Such a cozy little poem :)
So beautifully written. Loved your Haiku!
Sure wish those embers would whisper to me right now... Your 'word paint' is glorious!
nice one-I feel warm
Gorgeous work AD! Go gurl! 💪🏾💕🫶🏾