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Field of the Unreturning

A Song for the Days That Will Not Come Again

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 3 months ago 1 min read

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

a drifting hush lies over all that waits to fall

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

A crown of wilted daisies shows what time has burned

their petals trembling at the season’s call

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

The creek repeats the truths I never fully learned

its glitter flickering against the coming fall

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

A chapel’s distant bell rings thin, its metal turned

by years of weather pressing toward their fall

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

The moonlight bares the paths where hope once burned

each trace diminishing beneath the pull of fall

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

I kneel where long-lost dreams once rose and wildly burned

their warmth now fading with the restless fall

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. I write about rural life, family, and the places I grew up around. My poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, My latest book. Check it out on Amazon

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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