fire in my gut, fire in my feet, my eyes, my heart, my breath
raging, roaring, frothing
my fire is green
rising
unyielding
extinguish this beast
extinguish me
this flame grew from jealousy
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ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)
~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/Her
Admin. Vocal Social Society
Find me: @andreapolla63.bsky.social
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Fantastic!
Oh this is so well written and alluring!
Excellent work
Brilliant. All consuming.
Another amazing poem. You are on a roll!!
I've been singed by flames of jealousy and it is like a dragon's breath.
Whoa! What's causing the fire/ An emotionally charged one!
Amazing! so gripping 🩷
Incredible poem!
Oh no, I sure hope you're not talking about yourself 😅