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If You're Feeling Blue

A Rhyming Haiku

By Lightning Bolt ⚡Published 10 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
soaring above

When in doubt

*~~~ chill out ~

When it's hard to sleep

*~~~ breathe deep ~~~

We will cry

*~~~ then ____ fly ~~~~~

Hawks fly by

We defy

FriendshipHaikuinspirationalnature poetry

About the Creator

Lightning Bolt ⚡

Bolt aka Bill, a bizarre bisexual bipolar alliterative epileptic Taco Bell Futurist 🌮, an Aquarian oddball w/ a malfunctioning brain. 🧠

I write comedy, poetry, sci fi, & horror.

I am shock therapy.⚡😁👍 Subscribing risks electrocution.

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  • Denise E Lindquist9 months ago

    Nice!!😊💗💕

  • Some nice words and images

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Wow, this is great, Bill. <3 Wonderful combo <3 Beautifully inspirational

  • Sid Aaron Hirji10 months ago

    this was awesome

  • 365poetry10 months ago

    It would be nice if I understood a haiku from an original stanza poem!!! They seem to be the same, and most often, I am unable to determine why!! Nice poem!

  • Rachel Deeming10 months ago

    I do love a bird and this was defiant!

  • Susan Fourtané 10 months ago

    I love this Haiku! And the birds in the video. So adorable. 🥰

  • Marie381Uk 10 months ago

    Amazing I love birds so much ♦️♦️♦️

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