You smiled
and the light
touched my s-o-u-l
You spoke
and my pulse
forgot to h-i-d-e
You looked
and my calm
split like f-i-r-e
You came close
and my breath
turned to w-i-n-e
You stayed
and I burned
like a s-u-n
You loved
and I
drowned in f-l-a-m-e-s
because you
were my
havoc—my w-i-l-d
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (15)
So lovely, komal
What a poem! Too good you are, komal! I love it! Best! 💯❤️
The thrilling passion in the poem is clear seen. Great talent you have my friend!
Captivating poem and well written.
really nice positive love poem
This is so beautifully written, soft, intense, and full of feeling. Absolutely loved it
I love this! Another amazing piece, Komal!
Beautiful
Loved it! Nicely done as usual, Komal. I don't know why, but I'm always trying to find the secret message hidden in the bold letters. You gotta give me a hint if there is a secret.
Spicy! I love it
Whew, Love like this—Dangerous, unwise and absolutely worth it! Brilliantly written.
Masterful, Beautiful, Like The Phoenix!
This is quite stirring and wonderful! :)
such a beautiful poet
As usual so fabulous you poetry tell a story so great every time ⭐️🍀👌🖌️🏆