Old habits
Are not easily broken
But you
Gotta be consistent
You gotta be open
~
Feeling about
What it's about
Feeling out of control
Have your doubts
~
Bring me around
Throw me out the door
Pretend you don't want me
Give me some more
~
Frolic around
Tease me out
Ignore me when it means something
Pour into me when it means nothing
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
https://www.instagram.com/soulpaintedart/
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Magic
Note from the Author: I want to let you know that this is an unusual story, and it has been written purely from whatever is in my unconscious mind, because before I start writing, I get into a flow state that reaches my unconsciousness. I also write in my subconscious mind, which is like a mid-flow state between the conscious and unconscious mind.
By Denise Larkin3 days ago in Fiction
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WOW WELL DONE