Original Sin
Inspired by Harper Lewis
Adam's not in view
No sharing our ribs tonight
I'll take the apple!
About the Creator
Tina D. Lopez
A woman who writes to deal with hurt, mistakes--mine and others, and messy emotions. Telling my truth, from the heart, with no sugarcoating.
My book Love Ain’t No Friend of Mine is available on Amazon. https://a.co/d/6JYBmLH
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December 8, 1980
When I was six or seven, my stepdad came into my life, and I remember thinking he knew everything. He could befriend anybody, anywhere. In grocery stores, he chatted with strangers over cuts of meat; at gas stations, he bonded with people pumping fuel over how the smell of gasoline was disgusting and yet enjoyable. In restaurants, he took an interest in waiters’ lives—like Steve, whose father was dying of cancer. When Steve’s dad died, my new dad attended the funeral.
By Tina D. LopezExclusive • about a month ago
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You are too kind, giving me a mention in your subtitle. If you're entering it in competitions, check how strict they are with the form--some enforce no rhyme in a haiku, others don't, rules should be explicit, but if they aren't send an email and ask.