Your bioluminescence stopped my
heartbeats. Eyes of fireflies: coasts of
ardor / foreign dreams. As one,
we plucked oysters from the
wild’s whorls - strung our pearls…
then were flung to
separate
stars and
worlds.
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-Gina C. 🧚🏻♀️✨
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Gina C.
Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds
Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
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Winterthorne
Winterthorne stood alone at the edge of the park. The beautiful snow that had surrounded him was all trampled now, from the feet of all of the children who had built him. He missed the sparkly clean snow blanket, but he was happy that so many children had come out to make him.
By Laura DePace6 days ago in Fiction
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Aweosme to read "Love is not only in the light, it deepens in the silence of the night. "Good night" is said in silence most of all."
The nonet is such a tricky poetic form, but you have employed it with great effect in this brush with love in all its fleeting intensity! Congrats on placing! Richly deserved. I love the pic too!
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This is such an amazing poem, love hog vivid it is.
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i love this
Congratulations! Love the perspective
Beautiful, just beautiful, Congratulations on your win.
Congratulations on placing in the challenge. I love “ Eyes of fireflies”💙.
Congratulations!!! 🎉
This is utterly gorgeous and I'm so glad it placed!!💛
Congratulations! This is a beautiful nonet!
This has such a beautiful rhythm to it and paints a really magical picture despite the sad prompt behind it. Congratulations on a well deserved win Gina!!
Congrats on your second place, Gina!
Welllllllllllll look at you, Ms second placer. Con-bloody-grats, Gi-bloody-na! :)
Oh my god, this is STUNNING, Gina!!! The descriptions of light and movement combined with the "stringing of pearls" and the ending...wow, I could gush. Amazing job!! <3
🤩💯 So happy for you, Gina! I knew this one was a contender the first time I read it! Super congrats to you!!!
Oh my "stars and worlds!" This is REALLY good Gina! Congratulations on placing in the challenge! You've done us all proud! 💙
I’m so happy to see you place in a challenge win, Gina. Your poetry deserves to be on a pedestal 🥹🌟💜
Back to say "Congratulations" on your win - I love your beautiful nonet.
Beautiful!! That rhythm is sublime, Gina. Congratulations! 🥳
Damn you got it! You deserve this win. You’re a legend and a true poet!! Congratulations 🎊
Woohoo!! Congrats on 2nd place, my dear talented friend!!
You absolute legend!!! Wtg my friend. I'm so happy for you.
Congratulations on second place!!!!🥈