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silence, a sweet surrender

a poem

By angela hepworthPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

sweet surrender in the sound of stillness

in all its inky, invigorating intrepidity

leaving long, lingering lapses of life

entombed within the epitomes of emptiness

numbing the null of nothingness

created by crises in cruel coping minds

edify us, silence; engrave everyone’s eager ends

Thank you guys so much for reading! ♥️

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About the Creator

angela hepworth

Hello! I’m Angela and I enjoy writing fiction, poetry, reviews, and more. I delve into the dark, the sad, the silly, the sexy, and the stupid. Come check me out!

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶2 years ago

    I love this alliterative acrostic! I find it almost impossible to resist alliteration 💖. I particularly liked: “ entombed within the epitomes of emptiness”

  • Antoni De'Leon2 years ago

    Silence can be sweet and it can be brutal. Still it is a lovely thing. Great poem.

  • Kodah2 years ago

    Beautiful💌 Beautiful 💌 Beautiful 💌

  • Oh wow, this was so beautifully profound! Loved it!

  • Caitlin Charlton2 years ago

    In silence we will heal. Just beautiful, I love the picture chosen and the words do a lot to take the breath away. A perfect nighttime poem I would say.

  • Alyssa Musso2 years ago

    Awesome poem! I love the alliteration!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    There is something inky in silence.

  • Well-wrought! Almsot like a prayer. To Harpocrates, perhaps?

  • Natasha Collazo2 years ago

    The last line pulled it all together. Great job! 👏

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