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Steel Meltdown

The Fire Between

By Andrea Corwin Published about a year ago 1 min read
Image by Bartłomiej from Pixabay

The midnight hush enfolds

me in my lover’s arms

tempers our moods

until body heat

turns daylight steel girders to

smokey platinum and

shimmering gold

A liquid fire slithers

into a sultry slur of

sensory syncopation

gliding, spiraling until

finally resting beside

my beloved

intertwined, nested

upon our marriage bed

Copyright © 1/27/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin

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  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    Made me warm. ⚡💙⚡

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Fantastic!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    This felt very unique in the approach you took, love the metal imagery among more traditional love poetry elments! it felt alive! very well done, Andii!

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    Such a beautiful entry! I loved all the imagery of metal, very cool.

  • Denise Larkinabout a year ago

    Wow. Loved the ending to this loving and endearing poem.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Good Lord, Andi! Talk about fanning flames! Great challenge entry!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Wow, that gave me such a vivid picture! Great poem, Andi!

  • Oooo, that was so intimate and steamy! Loved your poem!

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    Fantastic poem! Great work

  • Mother Combsabout a year ago

    🩷oh, so beautiful!!

  • Shalou♥️about a year ago

    Heyo✨ Let's do a teamwork I like your stories and you gonna like mine 🫶🏻♥️

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh, that's hot! Well done.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This is quite the steamy love poem. Good job.

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