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Sugar, Sugar

You’ve Got Me Wanting You

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Sugar, Sugar
Photo by Garett Mizunaka on Unsplash

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sitting next to the sea

a cold drink in my hand

a sweet gentle breeze

and my feet in the sand

came some movement above

in the rustling palm

I watched a fair feathered dove

trying to fly in the calm

she shuddered and shook

stretched her neck and flew past me

she posed and she looked

like a rare origami

as I watched in a trance

this strange and beautiful dance

the waiter caught on and came over

please ma’am he said, as he touched my shoulders

“whatever you do, please don’t feed her

she’s shameless and bold but she won’t hurt a soul

she just wants a taste of your sugar.”

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    Feed her! Love it

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Aww, this is a really cool entry to Poppy's Prompt!! Loved it.

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    Such a gorgeous and sweet poem!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    This is an amazing poem, Kelli. Powerful imagery and the final line blew my mind!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Reggie Mantle of 'The Archies' nice touch. Living the dream.

  • Kodah2 years ago

    I used to love that song when I was little!! Incredible poem! 💌

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Nice poem, like a song.

  • Bren2 years ago

    Came for the song, stayed and enjoyed your piece. We all want a taste of the sugar 😁

  • ReadShakurr2 years ago

    Amazing

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