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Suitcases Packed in the Hall

It’s over your wifeless homeless and broke with a fish

By George’s Girl 2026 Published about a year ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Suitcases Packed in the Hall

Suitcases packed in the hall,

just a note—no need to call.

I’ve left you here, I’ve shut the door,

this house is ours no more.

Homeless now, wifeless too,

bank account? Emptied through.

I’ll think of you in your new slum,

with her beside you—have some fun.

Good luck, goodbye, no tears to shed,

I took the dog—he’d end up dead.

Your goldfish waits, no love to spare,

downstairs, beside your case, right there.

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George’s Girl 2026

I've been writing poetry since the age of 10. With pen in hand, I wander the realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture you ❤️#Marie381UkWrites

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This is a humorous poem over what must have been something nasty. Good job.

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