Sway
For the Breakup Nonet Challenge
Into your arms I swayed - drunkenly,
high on your love, your poise, your charm;
a promise of a future
that I nearly choked on,
left rolling on my
back, drowning in
my own pride
and your
drug.
About the Creator
Amanda Starks
Epic fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Magic, swords, and monsters abound!
You can check out my website here!
RE:SURGENCE now available for download!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (12)
Congratulations on placing in the challenge ๐คฉ.
Oh this is incredible. So well done. "a promise of a future that I nearly choked on," Is so powerful. So glad to see you placed Amanda! Congrats๐
Congratulations! Superb nonet! Really felt the motion in this
Well done Amanda! ๐ซถ๐ป๐ค๐๐
I love your nonet - congratulations on your win!
Oh goodness this one hits hard, Amanda. Congratulations on placing
Congrats!
Lovely poem. Congratulations!!
Fabulous nonet!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Such an intoxicating verse. Well done. <3
Oh, this is very good. Well done.