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The Casket of Regret

A Villanelle

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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Upon the midnight's mournful air,

A spectral voice finds my ear,

The memory I cannot bear.

It speaks of all that was so fair,

A love that vanished, swift and sheer,

A spectral voice finds my ear.

I wander through this cold despair,

This lonely crypt, this chilling fear,

The memory I cannot bear.

A raven in my heart, I swear,

Sits brooding on a silent tear,

A spectral voice finds my ear.

With shadows as my sole repair,

My sanity grows thin and sere,

The memory I cannot bear.

This grief, a weight beyond compare,

Will haunt my soul from year to year,

A spectral voice finds my ear,

The memory I cannot bear.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. I write about rural life, family, and the places I grew up around. My poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, My latest book. Check it out on Amazon

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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  • Krysha Thayer6 months ago

    I love the refrains as they work so well together. Great job!

  • Sean A.6 months ago

    Amazingly well done! Great reappearing lines, loved “a raven in my heart”

  • Oh wow, this was soooo poignant and emotional. Loved your poem!

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