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The Girl Who Dreamed Beside Bone

Wonderland Challenge Day 13

By Diane FosterPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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This poem is about reverence for the mysterious, and the sacredness of slowness in a world that demands noise and certainty.

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She did not speak often,

not because she lacked words,

but because her slumber was a sanctuary stitched from whispers and forgotten lullabies,

and the world outside her silence always asked too much, too fast, too loud.

They called her strange,

this girl who curled like a prayer beside a bleached skull crowned with ancient ache,

its teeth like frozen confessions,

its hollow gaze a gate to somewhere old and trembling with memory.

She wasn't afraid—

only stilled by an overwhelmed reverence in the presence of something that had outlived storms,

famine, fire, and the names of those who once held it in fear or devotion.

To her, it was not death,

but a mirage of what comes when longing has nowhere else to go,

a lull in the pulse of time where even sorrow learns to be soft.

She dreamed with it the way others dream of oceans,

of flying, of love—they shared a quiet pact,

the girl and the horned sentinel of once-was,

as if each night she curled close enough,

she might one day understand what it means to stay,

and what it means to be gone,

and why the heart wants both.

Ballad

About the Creator

Diane Foster

I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.

When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.

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  • Tanya Lei14 days ago

    A slowness, that so many will never know or understand. This fast paced world has people believing that it is not nature to relax into self. This poem gathers the parts of us that need the kind of nurturing that can only be touched when we stop to breath. The end especially: "she might one day understand what it means to stay, and what it means to be gone, and why the heart wants both." I felt this drop into my heart as if it was something that I have been needing to hear (or read). I feel this feeling every so often and it can be so tantalizing, as I feel I'm being pulled apart. I love this poem

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Such a wonderful tale, Diane

  • A bleached skull, something both present & yet not. Interesting talismanic approach to liminal space.

  • C. Rommial Butler10 months ago

    Lovely and well-wrought! "...a lull in the pulse of time where even sorrow learns to be soft." Some of us feel this as Peace.

  • Ellie Hoovs10 months ago

    Gorgeous! Why the heart once both is a fabulous close.

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