It grabs and pulls me
leaving red strips on my arms
and now I wonder
have I taken the right path
or maybe I’m lost again
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Archery Owl
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Comments (8)
I’m lost again..dont think like this one day you can fly.wonderful written 🌹🌹🌹
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A question we can all relate to for sure! 👍
This is written so plainly though it's such a heavy topic.. like it.
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Red strips. Sunburn? Brambles? Hopefully, nothing too damaging. And getting lost is just exploring by another name.
Oh dear don’t get lost in brambles or blackberry bushes. 👣
This is very thought-provoking and outstanding because life is full of paths, and it’s hard to know which one to take sometimes. Thank you for sharing this as it’s relatable, good to think about, and it also makes me think of Robert Frost’s a path or road not taken.