Under my umbrella Ella Ella…
Love in 50 words
By Caitlin CharltonPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Helen Cheng on Unsplash
I’ve got a story to tell
Of the time when I fell
In love with the thrill
Seeking adventures with a friend
Under my umbrella
We settled in the chill
Forgetting from whence
We came
We built
And travelled
We fell
Until we wed
Until the day our story ends.
About the Creator
Caitlin Charlton
Noir Writer & Close Reader. Spotting the elements of Eloquence.
Survivor. Reclaiming my own territory.
Let us read each other and leave the page free. 🖋️🔥👠
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Comments (11)
Lovely words ♥︎♥︎♥︎
Beautifully poetic and nostalgic! The essence of adventure, love, and the passage of time in a rhythmic and heartfelt way. Beautiful 50 Words 😊✨
Sweet & Romantic! Love the Rhianna reference as well! :)))
One of my little girls (aka dogs) is called Ella, Ella Ruby.
What a way to remember the first time you fell in love with that special someone. Good job.
Under my umbrella Ella Ella…beautiful love
This feels like the beginning of something tender and nostalgic, like a love story wrapped in adventure and companionship. The rhythm has a gentle flow, much like rain falling under that very umbrella. I’m curious—what happened until the day? Feels like there’s more to uncover! 💖🤗
Lovely poem, and the title make me think to the song while reading, yeah!! 👏✨😎
This is a delightful little love poems. The joy of being together fairly radiates in your words, Caitlin! Another excellent challenge entry!
Loved this poem, made me want to reach to this new love.
Friends to lovers to marriage. That's so wonderful. Loved your poem!