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Sweet Tarts and Sweet Hearts... Vocal Challenge Entry
I Might Take The Longway Home After School,
I'm Walking, While Conveyed In Your Fantasies...
Valorous Thoughts Flood My Mind,
As, I Daydream of What I Would Do,
To Be Locked In Your Galaxy, No Worries Just Wandering Freely...
I'll Explore You, While You Explore Me...
Meanwhile, President Trump has been Throwing Ice Around -
I Might Take The Long Way To The Break Room, Just To See His Face, Matching His
Oblique Personality...
One Day There Will Be Marriage, And A Fantastic New Life Laying In A Carriage...
A Forever Valentine 💝 And ✨️ Friendship With Love As My Ambiance...
Sometimes The Longway Is Meant For An Optimistic Actuality!
To Create A Hopeful Revery, You Only Need An Active Reality!
Embrace Your Longway -
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Note from the Author: I want to let you know that this is an unusual story, and it has been written purely from whatever is in my unconscious mind, because before I start writing, I get into a flow state that reaches my unconsciousness. I also write in my subconscious mind, which is like a mid-flow state between the conscious and unconscious mind.
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Comments (16)
Loving this, Lonzo; congratulations on this week's leaderboard placement❣
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations in your leaderboard placement!🍾🥂💖
Well sweet lovely take on this I got 💜
aww how sweet
Nicely done.
Really well done, Lonzo! I actually read this the first time without realizing it was for the challlenge. The line made me stop and wonder, so it was effective!
Love and LIGHT
This was so sweet and wonderful. Loved it!
That unnecessary line fell perfectly and changed the tone for a sec. Best of luck, Lonzo! Great poem!
Lovely, Handsome <3
Aww, so beautiful!
Uber-gorgeous! Go King Go! 🫶🏾💕💪🏾👑
I loved the theme of taking the long way and the general energy of wandering and daydreaming. Fantastic poetry!
Love the title 😍 Sweet Valentines feeling for sure
What great advice for it may take longer but the rewards are greater. Good job.