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Fantastic Mr. Fox (2009) -- A Critique
Fantastic Mr. Fox (2009) is a stop motion animation movie based on the book of the same name by Ronald Dahl, who also wrote Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. The plot revolves around Mr. Fox, an ex heist master who lets his confidence reign free above all else. Because of his ego, Mr. Fox (voiced by George Clooney) makes a mistake on a heist with his wife, Felicity Fox, and they become trapped in a cage. As they face certain death, Mrs. Fox reveals she's pregnant and tells her husband that if they survive, Mr. Fox needs to promise he will never try to steal ever again. Mr. Fox agrees and they dig their way to safety.
By J "Griffin" Rooms3 years ago in Critique
Water Only diet
Have you ever heard of something called water fasting? Well, it’s a type of fast that restricts everything except, well, water. Most people only water fast for 72 hours at most, but what if you did this for the rest of your life? You’d be fine, right?
By ALICE WAMBETI3 years ago in Critique
How to Critique a Blog Post
A blog critique is a written evaluation of a blog post. It can be used to improve the writing, content, or design of the blog post. When critiquing a blog post, it is important to be constructive and specific. The goal is to help the author improve their blog post, not to tear it down.
By Timothy A Rowland3 years ago in Critique
You can do it
I sipped my coffee late in the afternoon. Applying at jobs and writing putting myself out there. For something good to come. I saw life from a lens of what would be. Not reality, I created my own sense of reality. Giving me the courage and optimism with it also actually being real reality. I saw myself nespresso machine and still going to buy a Starbucks. The riches others dream of also . But don't have the belief they can do something new. I try as Alice in wonderland says and try to do the impossible everyday. Who says the impossible is actually impossible? Not I. I in fact know the impossible is actually quite the opposite and a very possible reality. The day was monday , my son is in school. And me trying to keep myself busy . Looking at manifesting videos and learning different things about skills. Me I am aspiring to be a lot of different things. Choose one they say? Absolutely not, I continue to pave a path others have not accomplished. Well others have. But none that I have met.
By April Liao3 years ago in Critique
Unforgiving- Alien Weaponry
I hate to admit that the first time I heard Unforgiving was in concert. The first time was surreal, as I stood next to my brother, who I nearly lost the previous year. Little did I know a year later, this would be my comfort song when my grandmother passed.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Man In The Box
Man In The Box has always been my favorite Alice In Chains song. Perhaps because I’ve often felt that I’ve been trying to escape the box that people are always trying to paint me into. Most definitely it has something to do with Layne Staley and Jerry Cantrell’s vocal styling.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
In the Mix with YouTube
Music mix channels are some of the best parts of YouTube. They keep you company when writing or studying. They’re great for finding new music, without having to dig through tons of other channels, or Spotify. It’s often the best part of my day to put music on and write.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
The Calvin Stickers
Let the grifters grift. It’s their only gift. You work hard on your craft. You spend hours on your craft. Just for someone to drop a link. Or worse, they drop something unrelated. It stinks. Maybe Bill Watterson was right, when he chose to ignore the sticker grifters. We’ll see.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
