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A Few More
A fist full of words Just a few critiques more That’s what was in store When the word slinger Pulled the computer from the drawer
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Unforgiving- Alien Weaponry
I hate to admit that the first time I heard Unforgiving was in concert. The first time was surreal, as I stood next to my brother, who I nearly lost the previous year. Little did I know a year later, this would be my comfort song when my grandmother passed.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Man In The Box
Man In The Box has always been my favorite Alice In Chains song. Perhaps because I’ve often felt that I’ve been trying to escape the box that people are always trying to paint me into. Most definitely it has something to do with Layne Staley and Jerry Cantrell’s vocal styling.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Unwrapping Barbie: Balancing Beauty, Impact and Imagination in 50 Words
An iconic figure influencing values. Plastic perfection upholds unattainable beauty standards. Barbie Movies: Colorful tales weaving friendship and ambition, but some critics note formulaic plots, provoking discussions about femininity. Cinematic journeys inspire despite debates
By Tereza Giannouri3 years ago in Critique
In the Mix with YouTube
Music mix channels are some of the best parts of YouTube. They keep you company when writing or studying. They’re great for finding new music, without having to dig through tons of other channels, or Spotify. It’s often the best part of my day to put music on and write.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
The Power by: Rhonda Byrne
It took a while for me to read it. It did not held my interest. A lot of quotes from famous philosophers, writers, religious leaders, Nobel Prized Winners and Politicians. Power comes from staying positive, love and staying away from negativity that penetrate your positive force field.
By Mariann Carroll3 years ago in Critique
The Un-Welcoming To Ghana: You Don't Invite Someone To A Dirty House
Thursday, 24 August 2023 By: TB Obwoge Momma Ebo, (That's what I will call her) would awake around 5 am, I think, because morning wasn't my thing after all.
By IwriteMywrongs3 years ago in Critique
How to waste your life without noticing?
You find a cool dish you want to cook one day. You find a place you want to visit one day. You learn a new skill you might use one day. What about now? You've been scrolling for hours. Forgetting the simple pleasure of unexpected lessons from the outside world.
By Martyna Dearing3 years ago in Critique
Rap
Where did you learn to write poetry? I read a lot of poetry. That's true. More often, I listened to rap. While I like most music, rap will always be one of my favorite genres. It has taught me more than rhythm and rhyme. It’s taught me about the world.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
What we do in the shadows
Taika is absolutely hilarious. People seem to forget that after Thor 4. If you need a reminder, I highly recommend watching "What We Do in The Shadows". I get it, it can be a niche comedy. But when you get a chance, watch this film! Hurry up with "We'rewolves" already!
By Dyllon Rodillon3 years ago in Critique
The Calvin Stickers
Let the grifters grift. It’s their only gift. You work hard on your craft. You spend hours on your craft. Just for someone to drop a link. Or worse, they drop something unrelated. It stinks. Maybe Bill Watterson was right, when he chose to ignore the sticker grifters. We’ll see.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique
Does size matter?
Does size matter? Am I critiquing an actual work here? Nope. Just expressing a thought. How big should a link be at the end of an article? I often like my pics for covers, because some Unsplash images make links too large when linked at the bottom of an article.
By Atomic Historian3 years ago in Critique