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Endurant

Unbreakably Broken (Epic Beginnings Challenge)

By Savannah K. WilsonPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2024

Falling … falling from a great height is the first memory I have. Followed by waking up to see my chest burst open on a rock, the rough stone covered in strange ancient markings. My legs shattered and limp, and blood gushed all around me. I looked up and saw a face high above, I don’t remember who it was. Just the smile as they looked down on me.

Watching my body stitch itself back together, the boned orientate and reseal breaks. I discovered that day, I couldn’t die … and trust me … I tried.

No matter what I do, I endure.

So that’s my name now, Endurant. I try to help others when and where I can, there’s no need for a mask … I have no secret identity or name, I don’t know who I was.

All I know is that face at the top of the cliff.

The first time I saved someone, the crowds cheered and thanked me, rescuing that little girl from the house fire, my burns healed before the ambulance arrived. No one noticed when I slipped away, ‘an angel of mercy’ they called me because of my long blonde hair.

Soon it all changed … people saw me heal from all manner of graphic injuries, the maniac in the shopping mall with the axe, that was the worst and most bloody of them all … after that people started hating me, even when I saved their loved ones. But I kept doing it, unable to die myself. At least I could save others, despite their hate.

For years I lived this way, until today …

Standing and waiting for the train in the subway … I saw the owner of that face, and I saw the train coming.

My turn to smile.

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About the Creator

Savannah K. Wilson

She/Her | Australian 🏳️‍⚧️ Author

Queer and all class with a touch of sass! (or maybe the reverse!)

short stories, poetry, life experience

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  • Test2 years ago

    Ohhh. That’s layered and complex. Great story!

  • BR D2 years ago

    Amazing story!

  • Thank you all for the love and encouragement this story has made 🩷 It means so much that people enjoyed it and found it enjoyable! Just came to say (cause I can't put it in body of story) that I'm planning a series of these 'Epic Beginnings' stories and they will all be connected in some way, sometimes subtle and sometimes directly (I really enjoyed writing this one and found I wanted to do another, then another!) My plan is to do 12 and then stop (which is roughly one per day the challenge is still live) So I guess keep an eye out for other 'Epic Beginnings' and if you like the character of 'Endurant' ... keep an eye out, you might like what happens. 🩷 Thanks again everyone! 🩷

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    So high energy and descriptive! Awesome story!

  • Pamela Williams2 years ago

    Amazing story!

  • Love it!

  • Damn this has high octane energy and great flow

  • Congratulations on your TS.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Rachel Steinmetz2 years ago

    Love the energy! You must be a strong woman!

  • This was intense. Great short story.

  • Alyssa wilkshore2 years ago

    Wowwww , love this

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Nicely done. Congrats on the TS.

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Whoa, creepy!! 🎉 🥳🥳🥳 Congratulations!!

  • Cindy Calder2 years ago

    An intriguing concept. Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Wow, such ungrateful people, to hate on someone just for being able to heal themselves? I'm speechless. I'm so glad she got to get her revenge at the end

  • DX Man. Poor Endurant. They deserved so much better.

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