Classic 1991 Break-Up
Closure is backed by a voice, not a script
Texting was no option. I call you
And say "Sorry, it's over," be
Mad, it won't change. The phone ran
Out of cord, like we both
Ran out of love. Like
A leash that snaps--
You scream hate,
I hang
up.
About the Creator
Jennifer L Osborne
Hello! Like so many of you, I love to write. In 2018, I self-published "Sebastian's Due". In 2022, I published the sequel, "Room for Sebastian". Can't wait to read the content on Vocal!
www.jenniferlosborne.com
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Pearl
1980 something. we all hung out at Pearl and you and i were nothing special, or so i thought. i mean we all danced, drenched in our own sweat, our own saline solution of fear, too many beers, shots, laughter, tears, fucks in the bathroom and i don't know when we began to be afraid. do you?
By ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)3 days ago in Fiction
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Heartbreaking
Impressive...☎️