Remembering A Dream
For "The Haiku of Now" challenge.
Was it real when I
saw someone walk in the room?
I heard them breathing.
About the Creator
Madison "Maddy" Newton
I'm a Stony Brook University graduate and production services manager for the NYS Assembly. Writing is one of my passions, and Vocal has been a great creative outlet for me.
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Livid Dreams are the deepest.... sometimes they always leave you hanging, longing, wanting more....and then sometimes you're so glad they're just dreams....keep writing
Omgggg, that's soooo creeepppyyyy! Loved it!
That happened to me a few times as a teenager. Our house dated back to the 16th century and I have written about my experiences on Vocal. Excellent words
That's creepy. Sometimes I wake up in strange places from the feeling of another's presence even though I know I'm the only one in the room. It really is scary.
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