Sky Bunting
An Entry for the Sky-ku Challenge
By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by ian dooley on Unsplash
Look! Coloured ball in
Romanticised suspension;
Decorates the blue.
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'Romanticised suspension' is an awesome phrase!
This is a nice idea
I absolutely love this one!
A beautiful haiku. And the image you used fits perfectly!
This was perfect
Sky bunting!
Clever and lovely Haiku, Rachel. The pic looks it's filled with sky marbles!
Nice entry my friend.☺️
Finallyyyyyy, something that I'm sure I cannot interpret it in any other way, lol. Loved your Haiku!
Delightful! Such beautiful phrases to capture a wonderful image!
Absolutely gorgeous! Hot air balloons are so beautiful.
Oh I love this Rachel!! Such a clear thing to find in the sky and so elegantly written!
Simply lovely, and what a pretty pic.
spot on! great entry :)
Amazing description, Rachel!