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Tired

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By Alyson Smith Published 11 months ago 1 min read
Tired
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Tired has already been shared on Vocal but this is the latest rewrite. I never think that I will go back to a piece once I have published it however I am increasingly aware that that is not how a poem lives it's life!

Tired

After Tulips by Sylvia Plath

I am trying to still the quickening

so they bring

me a bolus and I stop

dancing and cleaning

cobwebs from the lightbulbs.

I am sleeping, but wake,

intermittently numb

to my surroundings.

I remembered no voice

but I did not feel alone.

Just tired. Absurd. And tired.

fact or fictionMental Health

About the Creator

Alyson Smith

Working Class Writer & Artist with Level I Autism & a whole lot of Bipolar. Based in Newcastle- upon - Tyne. MA in Creative Writing.

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  • L.C. Schäfer11 months ago

    I love your poem! Could you link back to the first iteration so I can see the difference? 🙏

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