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Star Trek: Strange New Worlds – "Subspace Rhapsody"
Embracing musical theater, the episode combines heart, humor, quality vocals, and unique innovation. Through songs, it explores characters' deep emotions, intricate connections, and personal histories. The innovative storytelling and fresh approach highlight Strange New Worlds' strengths, leaving a lasting impression that intrigues viewers and invites more exploration within the series.
By Mark Randall Havens3 years ago in Critique
Draft: De-cluttering
*If you want to skip ahead to the part I want feedback on, scroll down to the header labeling the drafted poem below. Lately, I have been having trouble with endings. Starting poems or prose is the easy part. A line comes to me and often starts as a quick note in my phone. It's easy to run with it, but where do I stop and how?
By Kay Husnick3 years ago in Critique
Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl has ruined the pirate genre for me
It was the first movie I remember seeing in theaters, and my admiration for its storytelling grows with age. It is the penultimate blend of action, wit, and mystery on the high seas.
By Stephen A. Roddewig3 years ago in Critique
Wuthering Heights - A Critique. Runner-Up in Critique Challenge.
A how-to on how not to have relationships. Ever felt ghosted? This ups the ante. Brontë brings us the original soap opera in book form, where everyone needs a therapist and an umbrella. If you can’t finish it, watch Ralph Fiennes go mad as Heathcliff on screen: a must watch!
By E.K. Daniels3 years ago in Critique
Ham on Rye by Charles Bukowski
A delectable snack sandwiched between two slices of testosterone and an influx of pitted skin, Ham on Rye is the finding of one's way in the world, in the rigidity of class, American angst, anger, and ego. It succeeded in alienating women through a sweaty and obtuse first-person male gaze.
By Kendra Marya3 years ago in Critique
Where The Crawdads Sing
A journey into a small Southern town where crayfish have learned to harmonize. Oh; and one of the hometown heroes died. Enter "Marsh Girl" who Smalltown, might-have-been-Louisianna is just "too big and important" to accept as one of their own citizens.
By Kent Brindley3 years ago in Critique
Bippity Boppidy BOO
I'd like to say this was a dreamy Princess fairy tail, but I'd really be lying. No, this is something a little more dark and tortuous. You see, there is a young woman Cinderella, 18 years old, living with two older sisters and her horribly wretched step-mother Dawn. Cinderella was a kind and simple soul, beautiful dirty blonde locks that grew to her lower back. She was mostly average in size, just as she was in looks.
By Tressa Rose3 years ago in Critique
Midsommar. Top Story - August 2023.
Ari Aster does it again. Skip the popcorn because you'll want to vomit at 1 hour, 1 minute, 37 seconds in. Watch in horror as this Midsommer night's terror takes viewers on a psychedelic journey, with an all-included burning bear.
By Ashley Lima3 years ago in Critique
