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Atomic Nonet

Not all breakups happen to people.

By J. Otis HaasPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Runner-up in Breakup Nonet Challenge
Atomic Nonet
Photo by Marek Studzinski on Unsplash

“It’s not you, it’s me,” says the neutron.

The other says, “Too crowded now.”

“We should split up,” they agree.

After kissing goodbyes

Nuclear hellfire

rains from the skies

At love’s end

All else

Dies

love poems

About the Creator

J. Otis Haas

Space Case

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶2 years ago

    Congratulations on your well deserved placing in the challenge ✅… a very different slant!

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    This is so well done! Congratulations on placing!

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Dang! This is brilliant! Congrats!

  • Ava Mack2 years ago

    Great job, J. Otis, congrats!

  • This is such a unique take on the challenge and a very well deserved challenge runner up! Well done 🙏🏻👌😇🌟

  • Cindy Calder2 years ago

    Such a great concept in response to the challenge. Congratulations on your win!

  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    WOW! Great metaphor work, J!! Congratulations!

  • Kenny Penn2 years ago

    Ha! Very cleverly done, loved it! Congratulations on placing!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    So creative! Congrats.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • A. Lenae2 years ago

    If I read a poem and want to immediately read it again, I know it will stay with me like a warm handshake. This is that. Love the parallels you're drawing and the sort of validation one might feel after reading this and having experienced heartache. It's indeed like a hellfire.

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Great different take.

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